I just want to tell you that the first track you made completely sucks. There is nothing original about it or special. I could make that same beat in about 2 minutes with Propellarhead "Reason". It sounds like a sound that came from a 1996 video game. You try and get dark/acid with it than drop in a sissy ass melodic whatever it was at the end completely killing it even more. On a scale from 1-10 I give you a 2 for trying.

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